Reflection:
• My original first draft was far over the word count by at least 1,300. I've worked incredibly hard to paraphrase and be concise.
• Feedback is a lot more positive on this draft and I will keep working towards implementing the suggestions to create stronger writing.
• Only a few things to amend and expand on: removing a header, expanding on two points!
• I've really wanted to involve Amy and work with tutor feedback to make my written work as academically sound as possible for submission and to instil confidence in what I'm doing. I've worked incredibly hard at researching and creating a strong portfolio of outcomes. I'm not just doing this to submit anything and pass. Last year was incredibly difficult for me and flagged up a lot of issues with access which then impeded my confidence. This year continued some of those concerns but many things are out of my control. What is in my control is my motivation and my determination to keep chipping away at working to create something to be proud of. I want to be proud of this year as I was of my first year of university and I am proud. That is the end goal!
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